Heartache’s Cure

2008 Poetry

Make me laugh till it hurts love,

I need humor to get through.

You took my heart and then breath,

as you walked away.

Author's Notes/Comments: 


The Dodoitsu is a fixed folk song form of Japanese origin and
is often about love or humor. It is un-rhymed and non-metrical.
It has 26 syllables made of four lines of

7, 7, 7, 5 syllables respectively.

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