Artistic Interpretation

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2006 Poetry

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Art is in the eye,

people see whatever they want,

or vision nothing at all,

only colors bright.

I see a man with violin

in the head of a penis.

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STYLE: SEDOKA


The Sedoka is an ancient Japanese form that predates haiku. The sedoka consists of six lines, 38 syllables, in a 5-7-7-5-7-7 pattern. Often the sedoka will have "twists" after the second and the 4th line. Sedoka resemble tanka (31 syllables in 5-7-5-7-7) and haiku (5-7-5) in that they are very brief/succinct. They often portray natural images and human emotions.]

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