HIGH !!!!!!

As the cloud of smoke collapses in my mouth
and my saliva runs like a faucet,
I feel no pain. I feel no chance of hope.
Just the sensation from the smoke.
It whispers into the air and my mind disappears.
Lost in my thoughts
of worry and sorrow,
my dreams are now incomplete
and my goals I can't reach.
Is my head on straight
Or is my body on backwards ?
I hear no words but it's talking like a speech
I will make it. I won't give up.
I'll try and I'll rise.
To the mountain skies.
Just let me get high,
And you will see.
Just how great I can be !

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I would appreciate honest feedback. Be as blunt as possible

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