A critique on my poem drugs ll

A critique on my poem drugs ll



Don’t get me

Wrong the

Program DARE

Is good

And it’s very

Educational

To the young

Generation in

A lot of ways.



But a lot kids

Who graduated

From DARE

Program these

Days end up

Trying drugs

And more then

Likely getting

Addicted

Anyway no

Matter what

The people in  

The program

Said about

Staying away

From drugs.

My point I’ve

Been around all kinds

Of drugs in grammer

And high school

And I know what

kinds of

effects

they

Can have on  

You.

If you like my poem

It’s fine but I write

What I feel inside

And some things

I write I do have

Strong feelings

Behind.

Feb 21st 2006,


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