Get to the choppa


Run as fast as you can.

I smell the fear in you.

The fear that collects inside your eyes

and pools in muddy waters.

Do not fear weak one;

You will die a hero's death.


Run as fast as you can.

Try to escape the doom that claims us all.

I am its instrument; I am its power.

I am here to expidite the processs.

Do not fear, intrepid warrior;

Only the strong shall fall by my hand.


Run as fast as you can.

My sight reminds you; I killed your friends.

My sight reminds you your life is at its end.

If you live, you shall kill me. If you die, I am forgiven.

Do not fear, songbird;

Your funeral dirge is nigh.


Run as fast as you can.

The weak fall. The strong survive.

Such is the rule of honor.

The unfallible code we live by.

Do not fear, young one;

The gods will be gracious to you.


Run as fast as you can.

Your salvation awaits. 

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Watched predator last night. That movie kicks ass!

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Astral_Tides's picture

"If it bleeds, we can kill it."

You captured the religion of the hunter race in tasteful form here.

You made it feel barbaric, yet elegant.

This was my favourite movie for quite some time, until I watched "Shawshank Redemption"

Superior construction, worthy of a good death.

Nicely done.


"The stars awaken a certain reverence, because though always present, they are inaccessible; but all natural objects make a kindred impression, when the mind is open to their influence." R.W.E.


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mrpoofs's picture

Thanks man! Ha that song is

Thanks man! Ha that song is awesome. Great to hear from you.