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~Free Poem~

(children's humorous poem)





The other day

I read some free poems,then I read this one…

One time and then twice and then three times…

And more, till the sun went down and I couldn't have more fun



I still can’t believe it, but there was this particular

Poem, that I didn’t really quite understand it,

At all,it didn’t make any sense to me, now thinking

About it I didn't even like it at all, I have to admit it…



In the first place this so called free poem,

Didn’t have any rhythm or any rhyme,

No rhyme! Are you kidding me!That wasn't nice,

And I am so mad,because I really wasted my time



No wonder it was advertised...

As a free poem right there in that place in the net, well to me

They just don't look like poems at all,as for being free,

I doubt anyone would like to go thru the hell that I was put thru!









Dorian Petersen Potter

aka ladydp2000

copyright@2007





August,29,2007






















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