@ 27.055 MHz: Ad Astra; Poem To A Young Man From Nara, Whom I Loved At College, 1978 [ /:\ ]

When we get naked,

I gaze into your eyes and 

see stars, your forebears;

they fused your body's atoms:

your beauty---their legacy.



Kyakuchuu

aka

Starward-Led

Author's Notes/Comments: 

In the first line, I used a phrase current on campus in the late Seventies, and likely spoken countless times each day.


I believe this is one of the best poems I have written.  I wish I had told him this in 1978, before he returned to Japan

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