poem_205_A_Comment_to_xYJonah

Goodness, My Dear

What beautiful art

You certainly know

How to tease a girl's heart



Your dialogue is nice

And you rhyme so well

Fitting words perfectly

As your characters tell



The story is sublime

The flow - no flaw

With seductive imagery

My mind in awe



To have read on this meeting

To have placed myself there

Become that petted female

Who instead has black hair



A body just as wanting

My signs tell the same

But instead of walking away

I'd stay for the game



I must say I'm jealous

In this reading chance

Instead of joining you

In your bisexual romance



"Next time" you say

As I'm cupping my chin

"Next time we shall

Allow the flames out, within"



And if we do meet

Oh heaven forbid

For thoughts about you

My mind can not rid



Our tantalizing touches

Your sensational scent

My whispering whimpers

In a dictating descent



I'll tell you of your beauty

What I see through my eyes

Of savory details

You won't receive from guys



Soft touches on your skin

Gentle kisses on your lips

A body just as turned on

Without the male bump to your hips



A smooth mound, as yours

No crotch to protrude

To prod at your treasure

Like a guys crotch so rude



I'd caress your body

Find those sweet spots

And work them just right

So you get the hots



Then tease you a bit

As your eyes start a glow

And nipples do harden

Your nipping does show



Two fingers firmly placed

Aside the hardening bits

As my hands also cup

The under of your tits



Massaging so carefully

Watching with intent

The expressions you make

To their fullest extent



Reaching a moment

When pleasure is high

I'll slide up a hand

Against your thigh



Tease at your panties

Or even lack of

Tracing my fingers

Still watching above



As your breath quickens

Chest rises and falls

Then give you support

Lean you against the walls



A decent I begin

But along the way

I give a playful tap

It is time to play



But if you wish to read more

I await your reply

Goodnight my, Darling

A kiss and goodbye







Dedicated/Inspired by: xYJonah of Literotica.com

Created on: May 13, 2008 - 2331

Author's Notes/Comments: 

To see the poem in which I am responding to visit this link (18+ only) http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=293573

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