War Scars

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The civil war is over;

A reassuring peace created

Amidst unsettling chaos.



The first battle began a year ago

With the sudden ambush

On a soldier hidden in the trenches.



Combat ensued.

The inexperienced and lonely soldier

Surrendered quite easily.



Although, a prisoner of war,

He was convinced that

He would find a way to escape.



But he didn’t know any better;

He didn’t realize how

Advanced the enemy’s strategy was.



With the plan of escape devised,

He made his move, but despite

His attempts, it only ended in bloodshed.



The wounded soldier marched on.

He would be better prepared next time

With the help of his new ally.



The next battle began;

It was all working according to plan

Until the soldier betrayed his ally.



Despite being deceived,

The ally fulfilled his promise

By assisting the soldier to victory.



But winning comes with a price:

Two causalities now coping

With their war scars.  

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The civil war is over;
a reassuring peace created
amidst unsettling chaos.

The first battle began a year ago
with the sudden ambush
on a soldier hidden in the trenches.

Combat ensued.
The inexperienced and lonely soldier
surrendered quite easily.

Although a prisoner of war,
he was convinced that
he would find a way to escape.

But he didn’t know any better;
he didn’t realize how
advanced the enemy’s strategy was.

He made his move,
but despite his attempts,
it only ended in bloodshed.

The wounded soldier marched on.
He would be better prepared next time
with the help of his new ally.

The next battle began;
it was all working according to plan
until the soldier betrayed his ally.

Despite being deceived,
the ally fulfilled his promise
by assisting the soldier to victory.

Together they conquered
their common adversary,
but the ally was injured in the process.

Winning came with a price:
two causalities now coping
with their war scars.

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