Forces of [Human] Nature

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Extended Metaphors

i. Wind



Lovers collide

and spiral into

lustful formations.



Hands shaped

like funnels

caress feminine

waterspouts.

  

ii. Flood



A surge of sweat

cascades from pores

onto body plains.



Her flowing

essence drowns

his lips and fingers.



iii. Quake



Winds and water

stimulate seismic

vibrations releasing

male rapture.



Bodies converge,

building up

friction within

burning cores.



iv. Erupt



Dormant feelings

explode beneath

molten flesh.



Craters burst,

spewing lava

upon body surfaces.


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i. Whirlwind

Lovers collide
and spiral into
lustful formations.

Hand-shaped
funnels caress
feminine waterspouts.

ii. Flood

A surge of sweat
cascades from pores
onto body plains.

Her flowing
essence drowns
his lips and fingers.

iii. Quake

Bodies converge,
building up friction
within burning cores.

Tsunamis stimulate
seismic vibrations
releasing male rapture.

iv. Erupt

Dormant feelings
explode beneath
molten flesh.

Craters burst,
spewing lava
upon body surfaces.

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