ALCHEMIST'S POTION

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georgeschaefer

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EXISTENTIAL SATORI

People rush for trains

I just sit back head ringing

eyes beginning to bulge out

thoughts bursting through skull

I begin to see through haze

dense fog choking off vision

Author's Notes/Comments:

sedoka is a style that uses 6 lines in a 5-7-7 syllable breakdown for each stanza.