ALCHEMIST'S POTION

 

People rush for trains

I just sit back head ringing

eyes beginning to bulge out

 

thoughts bursting through skull

I begin to see through haze

dense fog choking off vision

 

Author's Notes/Comments: 

sedoka is a style that uses 6 lines in a 5-7-7 syllable breakdown for each stanza.

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