THE COLOURS OF YOUR HUE (Collaboration with Deborah Russell)

(Muhammad Naveed Ahmed begins stanzas,

and Deborah Russell responds:



NAVEED:

You and I, let us seek fresh solitude,

Where there is no rush, where there's no dead wood,

Where you and I can see all the way we want to,

Where just talking gives peace and harmonizes mood.



DEBORAH:

Let us seek the warmth of sun and smell the light of each day new,  

And confirm the beauty and grace of trees against the skies.



NAVEED:

Let me see you happy and carefree,

Laughing at the surrounding beauty,

As your eyes reveal the secrets of your soul,

And time loses meaning and we see eternity.



DEBORAH:

In the deep silence of understanding and earth's unity,

We continue to seek only nature's harmony,

Where souls weave in song's sweet brevity.



NAVEED:

The music of silence being felt by us both,

The rapturous melody all encompassing,

The understanding that can be felt by our hearts,

The solace that wisdom unravels as a whole.



DEBORAH:

We cast troubles in the deep blue of the sea,

And leave worldly sorrows to set our hearts free.



NAVEED:

I will watch you as you paint a world with your words,

Inspiring me to join in and share anew,

The strains and stress of a sorrow-filled world,

Painting them again in the colours of your hue.



DEBORAH:

And even the trees give ear to your song,

A psalm of kindness that undoes each wrong.



NAVEED:

The song that you and the birds will sing,

Will be refreshing to the soul as life-giving spring,

Taking the mind to heights never dreamed of,

Fine-tuning the symphonies on ethereal wings.



DEBORAH:

A stream of clear notes that washes the soul  and heart,  

That cleanses the dark of eyes and makes a new start.



NAVEED:

Come let us away to the place of the true,

And let us find what we sought.... me and you.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Online collaboration done without preparation on a fine summer's evening...Deborah had a fine knack of doing online rejoinders, like me...as she used to say :) ...we both loved such online collaborations.

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