PostPoems Be Artistic. Be Creative. Be Inspired!

trapped in barried
feeling so much you had to carry your burdens
makin sure everyone heard them
and they were
the perceptions received isnt hate but a question
who is second guessin here
when the words that were spittin
werent even of the words that were written
but its a free mans cage that keeps him trapped in a tunnel vision
nothing but him and him in it
his thoughts and feelings flow like rivers
and i appreciate the talent in them
but the words he pick werent very thorough
with the weeks he had
his response only sound like a demo written of many
the truth hurts him as well as many
immaturity keeps him from speaking directly
so he lets the public know incorrectly
that he was dissed when really there was a missing key point
there is no competition or criticism
and the thing that kept him from ever winning was his weakness
of Ms! understanding
its only opinions that poets are demanding
but because its a free mans words
i'll surrender
because its not criticism im giving
but if it was
he like every freeman will have to live with it