after math of dads passing away

i need you in my life.i want you back at any price.now whos gona put me in place when i run far from the race.i wana jump that hurdle thats in front so you wont struggle.lifes not fair thats why i told you daddy i care.i wake up with a frown on my face cuz daddy you left and took the crown off the case.no matter how hard i try to move on i cant do it cuz im just not that strong.i woudlve gave you my heart in order for you to live but it was too late.so god pulled the plugs and showed us ur fate.i cried all night cuz of the fear that no one can take ur place and treat us right.mom is fighting the fight but now i think shes blinded by the light.she cries every day so in her mind the sun only fades.darkness arises from the floor and all of a sudden i shut the bathroom door.i turn the shower on but truly my tears are coming off my face like a kentucky durby race.when you left i thought god just commited theft.he took my soul and ate from a bowl.im gona be the man that mom wants to see stand.im going to make the money even if i have to dress up like a bunny.i walk on my two feet even though its a 100 degrees of heat.

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after my father passed away i started writing but i have no clue if these are any good.feed backs and opinions are greatly appreciated

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