To my Princess

So where to start,
with someone whose such a cutie,
Inside and out,
the definition of beauty.

I still remember the day,
you noticed me unlike before,
seems to be a memory,
I cannot help but adore.

When we are together,
time seems to go too fast,
If I only had the power,
The power to make that time last.

To me, you are the brightest star under sunlight,
Thats one thing thats for sure,
I just hope you are always treated right,
Because you deserve everything and more.

I only hope you know,
whether were friends or still more,
Where ever it is you may go,
Ill never close my door.

So when ever you may feel down, or like life has gone a skew,
or if your just upset, about what your going through,
just know you can look here,
should you ever shed a tear,
Because my words have always been true,
Ill always be there for you.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

This is my first time ever writing a poem. It is for a girl i care about/really like. We've been dating for some time now and she is about to move 8+ hours away after college. Its really short and not anything special but just looking for some thoughts on it. I'm hoping to give it to her with her v-day presents so any feedback would be nice. Again its really short and I'm not a poet, just trying to make someone smile.

And yes I stole a line from lil Wayne lol

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An eternal promise to be

An eternal promise to be there... what could be more beautiful...
Thank you Please keep writing



 

 

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Welcome

Welcome to PostPoems , and Thank You for sharing ,it is a wonderful read I enjoyed it ....


you laugh at me because I am differant, I laugh at you because You are all the same ...(KoRn) J.D......

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Thanks! I appreciate it

Thanks! I appreciate it