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His smile’s always wistful as if

His head’s full of dreams

Of a cloud with a castle

And his very own queen



Imagine the wisdom

He might have to convey

If only we spared him

The time of day

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last updated 11 October 2010 - 6:04am
©5 March 2002 - 5:18am — cornaflakegrrrl
11 October 2002 - 9:23pm — Donna Allard (not verified)
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Lovely. Everyone deserves to be treated with dignity and heard.

25 April 2002 - 12:04am — Matt Winston (not verified)
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Dear Esmerellda,
This is very compact. It is really quite perfect. Even if there wasn't a part 1, it would work very well. it has a beautiful, story book appeal to it.

"Of a cloud with a castle
And his very own queen"