please help me with the title ( i just composed this )

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joarth21's picture
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before you met me
i was watching you from a far
i was like a child
sitting beside the window
staring at a star
my friends told me
i can get you without a doubt
so i summoned my courage
to ask you out
i was so shy
it was an awful shame
i asked u on a date
without asking your name
the day we met
i had a hard time saying "hi"
but i had no idea
that its harder to say bye
but that wont happen
coz i will always stay
just like a dog
waiting for my master
to come home everyday

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A very nice read so simple

A very nice read
so simple and sweet
a few suggestions:

This Dog found Home
From first Vantage
Doubt and Prevail
Like Gaze to a Star`
Forever Returned
Of Dogs and Masters
Like a dog...
Of Goodbyes Never Spoken
Star born Afar

I liked the Lovestruck Puppy suggestion myself as well
but however you come to title it good luck!

 

Ascesa e rialzarsi fino a quando gli agnelli diventano leoni

Rise and Rise again until Lambs become lions

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name suggestions...

-lovestruck puppy
-moth to a flame
-no shame no gain
-dogged determination
? tough one...good luck, nice rhyme.

Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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I like love struck puppy

I like love struck puppy