Friends to Lovers to Strangers

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Acrostic Poetry

Kept it confided in this hollow chest

Endangered by this sensation at its best

Intimacy and passion are raging in

Tenderly breaking and wanted to be seen


Hidden attraction wordlessly being visible

Altering our very nature by your love’s gamble

Listening to my heart which leads me to the edge

Daring me to feel your heart’s secret message


Rapture me by the intensity of your will

Indulging me with a promise for us to seal

Never imagined I could feel this desire for you

Submit myself and risk everything through


Admiration blinded me to seize uncertainty

Nonetheless it just gives me a total insanity

For all this time, I am the only one who’s fallen

Ended wounded by your words I’ve mistaken


Lovers we are supposed to become

Indifference replaces what we came from

Promise of friendship is forever broken

Embrace me my stranger, the one you forsaken


Author's Notes/Comments: 

I didn't think I may be able to finish this one. It hurts from the start. Just staring with the draft, having the letters of his name in every line. The pain, I'm feeling it all over again. I have been suppressing it with all I am but here comes the point that my heart still aches for what it has longing. My good friend, the closest to me is now gone, and with him he has taken my heart. There was no closure, I don't know where to go from where he has left me. What am I gonna do? How am I suppose to know when he has erased all the clues? This is absurd. I'm still hoping, waiting, but I wanted to get tired of it. I don't wanna feel the hurt and pain all freshen by the end of the day.

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the pain of my understanding

After reading your poem and your comment of explanation, I can understand... There is a woman who I had known for A few years and we were very dear friends, then one day we became more.. Not sure how it happened but I fell hard. After a few months she started acting different. Eventually, we split up. I didn't understand... Then people we both knew told me she had been going around telling everyone how she had me wrapped around her finger and how she could get anything she wanted from. Me.

I learned she was using me for just whatever she could get from me...

I was crushed... We no longer are friends and we don't talk anymore, I rarely see her but when I do... (sighhh) I still feel my heart skip a beat, take my breath away and feel hope... But I won't let myself be a fool again... So I say nothing, look the other way, and move on...

Sometimes even tho we move on... Our heart doesn't, It takes our mind to force ourselves to walk on... I love your writings, you write like I do...

Good luck and never stop hoping for love...

ChryWizard (Paul)


As the eyes are the windows of our soul,

My poetry is the windows of my heart!!!

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hi thanks :)

Thankyou Miss. I really appreciate the encouragement. It's really been a while, but I think I hardly moved from where I am left. Funny thing is I'm still hoping despite everything. :) THANKYOU THANKYOU :)


Diana

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I Wish

I could write about men who broke my heart, but it would turn into a novel. Anyway when I think of them and that r a r e l y I want to load the gun and buy a ticket. Nor really, but it's the thought that counts. I'm 66 - kinda late for hoping that 98 year old prince is gonna show :D hope springs eternal! ~A~

 


 

 

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I wish

Well my lady if it's a little late for you to hope you find that "98" year old lover then Im in bigt trouble... Because I'm a hopeful romantic,,and I just turned 60 in Sept. . And I don't need a little blue pill to make things work...LOL

Paul

 


As the eyes are the windows of our soul,

My poetry is the windows of my heart!!!