what a charming illusion of peace for confusion.
Time after time I saw you smile again and again.
Black desolate heart I would never begin to think that you would be the one to pretend.
But here we've reached the end, and it doesn't matter to what state your in.
Even so I had saw the condition before, though my hope was waiting at your last.
They say you had a bright future, but it had already come to pass.
Now where is your prize, the one they've promised you?
What a charming illusion.
really enjoyed this one,
really enjoyed this one, looking forward to see more from you :)
thank you, well then in that
thank you, well then in that case make sure you read the recent ones I have posted. :)
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good work
good work.
thanks Adeyoken, I am glad
thanks Adeyoken, I am glad you like it. peace be to you.
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Amazing
Your word choice and everything flows, I loved it and can't wait to read more of your poems. Keep up the good work!
You can only be as beautiful as you tell yourself you are, but you can't let beauty get to your head.
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Thank you :) you are my first commenter! :D I'll make sure to check your poems out soon thank you I am glad you like it I hope to have more poems soon.
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