don't let me down

  i miss you so much

  even though i say that i'm over you.

you were a dream.(come true)

i screwed it all up.

  i regret everytime i complained to you and

  treated you like crap.

i'm now deep in my mind realizing how

good you were.(to me)

  i want you back in my life.

  i want for us to be how we were.(before our fights)

i can't get over you no matter how hard i try.

i can't let go.

  come back to me, please.

  don't let me down.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

written 1/12/03

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Afzal Shauq's picture

let me say again and again the same words from the core of my heart that..love the logics expressed in this poem with a good idea.. I went through few of your poems and loved them too..you are good poet and hope you never stop writing and add more poems.. this poem is good and love it..hope you like my poems too.. and let me know if they also touch your heart.. I am basically a peace wisher poet with 6 books published... I am a peace dreamer, love-based peace promoter... hope you be with me... let me share here one of my own famous say with you... ( a friendly smile is the best weapon of war to fight with..afzal shauq

Mitchel Barnes's picture

(to tylers response)
go find someone famous- y someone famous, y not someone she can trully love and that person return it back to her. but hey, what over floats your boat.

Tyler Rodrigue's picture

...he never came back...but, that's okay, i've got someone good and i'm not letting go this time.

-smiles- You're way too good to/for me. I don't deserve you. Honest. Go find someone famous.