The Mind Unclouded

In trying to
Forget about you
I only learned
How to lose
Everything else.

And that's meant to be
A good thing
Freeing
And all that

So there was I
Nothing left
But you.
Intensifying everything
You and desolation, mostly.
A reminder

My life isn't complete, but
It's independent and there's
Much to be said
For that.

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Dhyana's picture

The mind unclouded is a

The mind unclouded is a fitting title... your poem resonates with me

strangelittleboy's picture

More people ought to use the

More people ought to use the word 'Resonates'.

SSmoothie's picture

Wow so poignant and true of

Wow so poignant and true of many, you put this delightfully well! great work!


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