A different mettle of fish (warning this may offend)

Did it again didn't you?
Just couldn't help yourself
Could you?

Was it worth it?
Was it what you were hoping for?
Now all the pieces lay dying on the floor
Twisting and flipping like fish on the deck

Gasping and praying and hoping for one last breath
The friendly gleam of the apollo has turned
And The sun baked steam of ire rises and smothers what's left

Another damn chance gone begging slam the fucking door
Pull out the ice and start the torture once more, test your mettle
You blocked out the sun and Icarus is safer Athena turned away.

Wipe that stupid shock off your face you moron
What did you expect the fucking rainbow faeries to come
And drape beads around your neck?

Was it the kudos? Or did you shit yourself again?
Stand up for your self you piss weak fuck! Take it on the chin
Don't sit there bitching and moanin cause your shit out of luck!

Don't come to me cause I don't give a fuck!
Ram your stupid excuses quibbering from your mouth
And jam them where Apollo won't go, and athena the bitch
Can visit Hades in hell to find what you sent fucking there!

Now clean up your mess
don't sit there staring,
its offensive as fuck!

Don't do this again you stupid twat.
Look at it
Just fucking look!

Was it worth it?
Was it what you were hoping for?
the pieces lay dying on the floor
Twisting and flipping like fish on the deck

Just couldn't help yourself
Could you?

Author's Notes/Comments: 

This is unexplained. I read a person today and this was the byproduct that came pouring out!

By the way when I say reading a person, I'm talking spiritually reading not literally reading. :) cheers. SS .

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I ike this poem it is very

I ike this poem it is very well vented ......


you laugh at me because I am differant, I laugh at you because You are all the same ...(KoRn) J.D......

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It may offend some to none ,

It may offend some to none , but say what you must to get it off your chest .. Freedom of speech right ....


you laugh at me because I am differant, I laugh at you because You are all the same ...(KoRn) J.D......

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Yup you got that right sister!

Always good to le it out! You do such a great job with it too! :D


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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Thanks I know I may rant on

Thanks I know I may rant on and on , but with no one to talk to it has to be done this way .. Thanks for taking the time and reading and trying to understand .. I know I need to stop complaing and just deal with it so I am done with it but not ready to make amends ...


you laugh at me because I am differant, I laugh at you because You are all the same ...(KoRn) J.D......

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I think the best poetry are rants and

I have quite a few rants! Lol! Don't ever worry about that! ;)


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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TRUE THAT

rants do seem to be some of the best poetry , I guess because it comes from deep down , feeling you must let outbefore it grabs hold of you and keeps you down .....


you laugh at me because I am differant, I laugh at you because You are all the same ...(KoRn) J.D......

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I'd say exactly that! :D

True dat! ;)


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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True Dat , sound like you

True Dat , sound like you know New Orleans Lingo ... With the Who Dat .....


you laugh at me because I am differant, I laugh at you because You are all the same ...(KoRn) J.D......

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Lol! Maybe

Word! ;)


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."