It was the limericks

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2011

 

I know it sounds crazy

But trust me its true
It was the limericks
That changed me and you
There quick witty rhyme
And vulnerability of spirit
Made me stop and ponder
Why it was that I fear it
They took my breath away
And I could no longer fight
All the feelings inside
Suddenly were right
Here was a man I could love
Safely for the rest of time
And my fears were foolish
He’s always been mine
So it was the limericks
That changed me and you
I know it sounds crazy
But trust me its true

 

 

Author's Notes/Comments: 

you have me writting like I'm 12 again lol thank god you can't see this really bad, cheesy poem :)

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ElsiePea's picture

Playful Limerick

There once was a girl with good habits.
A cold clime she always inhabits.
She could write like a dream.
And write poems filled with steam,
But spends her day running with rabbits.

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:)

ok YOU are AWESOME!


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Ashley

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Cheesy? Gee mine must wreak

Cheesy? Gee mine must wreak of parmasan!? Lol! I loved this gesture and the fact it was swissy and gooda in every way ;)


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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:)

lol I always feel evil when I write happy poems because they are all cheesy :) then again I do love a Gouda


Much Love

Ashley

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i

love cheese - for i am a mouse!

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uhm thanks, I think?

uhm thanks, I think?


Much Love

Ashley

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the

limerick is a personal favorite, indeed it was a compliment ;)