a shrieking solitude

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Your anger is like a tidal wave and I hate you.
Pointless as the dance of the paradise bird in an empty forest,
Your flashy colors of rage and your calls of emptiness and hate choke

Drink another beer you head strong fool
You will lose everything that means anything as you do.
Our lives are as broken as the shackles on a prisoners feet,
Broken enough to give hope for a fairy-tale release,

How do you become complacent? Void,- empty?
How do you find the strength not to care?

It seems like such a blissful state
To live without remorse without regret
Without concern for others
What a life of nothing you must live.

Are you happy there in your pretend life?
That castle made of lies and deceit
Is it quiet in your emptiness?
Your solitude of understanding,
Or are there torrents of thought destroying your sanctuary.
In that dark hollow of your mind,
Beckoning you back to reality,
To the world of suffering
The suffering you caused.

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WOW POWERFUL!

Great job! Magnificent write! I love reality checks! Thanks SS


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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Thank you so much Ssmoothie :) reality checks are usually done with action so the one getting it never realizes that they just experienced one. LOL OH WELL right lol Take care and thanks again for stopping in!