frustrated rambling

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Added in 2011

Broken pieces,
It’s like I’ve died
Do I know you?
I’m sure I tried

The dark silhouette
The silent man
Always hiding there
Inside your can

The aluminum shield
The liquid strength
The coward shackled
The shortest length

Leave me alone
Run and hide
Im better off
You always lied.

Tired and restless
The wounds of time
Only relief now
The tireless rhyme

Paper and pen
The only release
I hate you now
I have made my peace.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

just throwing thoughts down.. disregard

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ThatCaptainguy's picture

I think there was a lot more

I think there was a lot more then just thoughts written here

raminastar's picture

Thank you

Perhaps you are on to something. I guess I just feel it is not my best and needs much in the way of recapturing all of the emotion that filled those simple, short and vague stanza's. Thank you for seeing deeper into my writting. :)