i felt the blood ooze through the holes
but i didn't feel a thing
the tears were rushing down my cheeks
as fast as speed could be
and you were yelling dirty words
but i couldn't feel the pain
your voice was drifting off somewhere
somewhere ... away from me
i burried your stupid ugly face
somewhere far from me
I was not listening to you
intead I packed my stuff
my feelings were hiding inside
so that you would never find them
and my heart was locked away somewhere
and where? you never new
i threw you out of my life
but somehow..... somehow
you've jumped back in
wow, i reeally like that poem. You did a really good job writing it. it is really obvious that you are talented......you must have been going through lotsa pain. Well i really like this poem the structure is really good and it has a realy good hook to it. GOOD JOB KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!