*Trilok*

               god was fighting the devil

                up in heaven and everyone

               on earth heard the sky light up

               with thunder and lighting god

                swung one mighty punch and

                knocked the devil out in

               10th round to save his people

                so we can go up to heaven

                 one day in the future



                this poem is all mine

Author's Notes/Comments: 

this poem is about
three worlds in this
life heaven earth and
of course down where
satans live scary yep .

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Rickk Berry's picture

I like this one. A very hmm... human view on things not the biblical view. I like it. Good work.