Thin Ice

You’re skating on the thin ice,

that lines my heart.

Just so you can break it.

With all the pressure and stress,

you’ve put on me for so long,

the thin ice shatters,

and you tear into my heart,

like wolves into flesh.

Inside… I’m broken,

as you happily swim,

in my puddle of pain.



~*~ Jill ~*~

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I wrote this on 11-1-03.

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gald u wrote
this poem