Ghost whispers

Ghost whispers
I hear the whispers of a dead man, lurking in the distance.
He is condemned between this world and the next.
Froze in the realm of time, this is the punishment for his crime.
Cursed with immortality, for his soul can never rest.
He is forced to hide in the shadows of darkness, looking for a medium to put his soul to rest.
Stuck in a place where there’s no smell, no touch nor taste.
The voices are clearly from the dead.
Now I ask myself, do I hear the voices or is it all in my head.

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SSmoothie's picture

faith

Hey, i love this poem and i love the discussion happening here! All excellent points raised here! If i may, i believe it or not have struggled with this issue, partly because i was raised as christian, and partly because of ghosts and premonition. I often wonder how people can be so in love with god with their palms raised up to the sky in humble obedience. I used to think and feel that they were more connected than me. I thought this buzz happened like a light switched on and god would talk to you. Well my dialogues with the other world is quite different but i know god is there when i need him in my darkest hours and any time. The reasons i know are significantly unusal so i wont go into it. But i have a few questions that might help. Have you ever felt guilt or shame? Have you ever just knowingly thanked god for something that went really well or was saved from something? Then you have faith you believe. Why else would you need to even have that emotional response. Church is in your heart. As long as your offering is from a good place and sincere you honor god. There are many roads to heaven god made them all. The mere fact you are searching for a faith is evidence of faith. Sometimes god is a quiet wisper on the wind. As for ghosts they have control over when they cross they just dont want to go or some visit freely. :) i hope you find what your lööking for! Hugs Ss.


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

wisdom's picture

Deep

Remember its a spiritual battle in life one we cant win but to choose the right path and walk by faith and no by sight ur life should not end it will be a new begining


wisdom comes from God

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right path and walk by faith

truly wise words my friend. I been searching for my path for many years i maybe of just found it yesterday to be honest with you. never though i would. .Thanks for your comment and time by friend

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You welcome

Hi I made a part 2 to mystery its called bloody murderer


wisdom comes from God

heatherburns35's picture

ghost whispers

this person evidently has not asked forgiveness for his crimes.
so his spirit could go on and be at rest. He is stuck somewhere
and cannot proceed. When our love ones pass, we must
release their spirit so they can go on to rest.
If not they will remain disturbed. Stuck between heaven and
earth, like in limbo. Mentally release this spirit to go on his way.

thoughtful write. hbw

poet610's picture

I have ponder such things

Thank you for your very welcome insight.
I am a lost soul who as been searching for faith for a long time now. yet for some reason willing but unable to find it.
I ponder such things as spirits, souls, good and evil.
I often like a ghost find my self stuck and in search for peace and rest.
I have spend the last two days in the hospital. hoping everything is ok after my test results get in.
My fear would be if i was to late in finding faith.
or maybe my bigger fear would be finding out there is no such thing.

heatherburns35's picture

faith

I am very sorry to hear you have been in hospital.
I hope everything turns out fine for you. I know
you have been through many trials in this life.
But remember there is a reason for everything.
God has his own way of doing things. With
every trial we become a stronger person to
face the next one.

We must have faith in order to face tomorrow.
Faith comes by hearing, and hearing through
the word of God. You may not believe me, but
I understand where you are coming from. So
many times I ponder the same things. But you
are never to late in finding faith. And I ask WHY

May I suggest, Pray and ask God to help you.
The only fear we have, is fear it self. There is
so much in life to be thankful for. Just look
around at the beautiful environment, our families,
love ones and so much more. Please excuse
me for preaching. forgiven I hope. And by the
way (you are quite a good poet). your friend in
verse Heather hbw

poet610's picture

Ask God

i have asked God to give me faith and had long talks with him.
maybe it is me who will not allow him to answer. or maybe some men are condemned for a life time.
But as i always do. ill continue the longs talks and the search.
610