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Puddled Tears

Puddled tears,
falling from her eyes,
make me weep
as I watch.
Feeling her sorrow overcome,
stirs my deepest soul.


© 2010 Philip N. Carcione

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The Shadorma

The Shadorma is a Spanish form of six unrhymed lines with a strict number of syllables per line.

The pattern is as follows:

Line 1: 3 syllables
Line 2: 5 syllables
Line 3: 3 syllables
Line 4: 3 syllables
Line 5: 7 syllables
Line 6: 5 syllables

You can string as many verses as you want.

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last updated 26 December 2010 - 10:26pm
©21 August 2010 - 6:48pm — phil_carcione
28 November 2010 - 4:49am — sanctus
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 Excellent work

 Excellent work

28 November 2010 - 1:23am — heatherburns35
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the shadorma

hi phil,   I like this pattern...I'm going to try it....thanks...heather..