My errors here,
My misakes there,
I've got my flaws,
As if I care,
You tell me all,
About the ways,
I make you mad,
and wreck your days.
You can't be shown,
Can't make you see,
That what you do,
It can hurt me.
And when I try,
To turn away,
Pretend I don't,
Care what you say,
It doesn't help,
It's always there,
The pain you cause,
Why don't you care?
Maybe I'm wrong,
Shouldn't complain,
If I'm hurt, it,
Means I'm insane?
This isn't right,
It's not the way,
You treat your friends.
You can not say,
That even though,
They're always there,
You blow us off
When others care.
So I will wait,
Maybe you'll see,
The wrong in how,
You're treating me.
But if I find,
I'm wrong to see,
And mistakes all,
Were made by me,
Then I will be,
The first one to,
Apologize,
Right then to you.
- Lo Ruhamah
when did you write this?? cuz its really sad, yet good...(am i freak for criquing all these poems??) i hope not But i hope everything turned out okay in this situation