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5 steps til hell
Half hearted smiles and
fake laughs hide the anger
the hatred for the world i
live in
You're illusions aren't worth
seeing and your fantasies
aren't worth living in
I'd rather take 5 steps back to
hell then to fall in love again
Trapped in these thoughts
i'll die lonely and confused
It's a lonely world for two
so turn your back and let me
watch you drive away into the sunset
while you leave me here to bleed
and suffer til morning
molly, your poems are quite fantastic ... some sad!! but well done. I love ur comment about san fransisco haha. anyway, thanks for all your feedback at my site - i almost cried on that last one. :)
bff
-me
this is a good poem with a lot of emtotion. i know what u mean in this one... u have a lot of talent keep up the good work...
Simply put, life sucks, but nothing is too bad that you can't come to me. I'll always be here, and I won't look away if you have something to say. If you ever need anything, don't be afraid to ask. If I can help, I will. If I can't, then I'll push myself past my known limits to help. Your too precious to me, and to not know you, would throw me over the edge. So, take 5 steps away from hell, and come back to me beautiful. You said things work out in the end...and it might just be me, but I feel that "the end" is sneaking up on us faster than we want to believe. I don't want to be wrong, not this time.