Electric Veins

when you make a mistake and give your heart, to someone who doesn't feel the same. your heart begins to fall apart, and you can feel it in your veins. Her beautiful face and dazzling smile, it hurts I won't see it for a while. The way my heart skips when you touch my face, I can guarantee that nobody will take your place. There's a war between our vanities, but all I see is you and me. I'm on my knees pleading for you to stay, but you pushed me down and turned and walked away. The electric shock of pain you sent through me, even though I knew we could never be. I wish that this feeling I get when I look at you, was shared between both, me and you. 

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i really like this

It has a certain charm :) cheers SS


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