Help Me

help me love myself, so i can love you too.

help me love myself, so i dont feel so blue.

help me love myself, so i can learn to grow.

help me love myself, so i can make it show.

help me destroy the pain, that is left in my heart.

help me destroy the side, of loneliness and distraught.

help me show the love, my mother shared and taught.

help me see the true side of me.

help me give what you give me.

help me get what i'm missing.

for this isn't a want, just a simple plee.

so please do one thing, help me.

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Alexis Hunter's picture

this is another EXCELENT poem...but this one line i dont if u would change it but i think i have an idea to make this poem even better then what it already iz when it sayz.
help me see the true side of me.
help me give what you give me.
help me get what i'm missing.

change the middle line to........help me give YOU what you give TO me...i think that soundz better, but what ever u want, itz good either way, lata