A Star Behind

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The light at night 
Is the moon and the stars 
With my wide chained hand 
Hear a treacherous ghost behind 
Dazzlingly many stars 
Brighter than side by side 
Count the stars with shining light 
Find a place inside your heart

 

 

 

 

 

 

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9inety's picture

I really enjoyed this poem.

I feel the poem attempts (cleverly, I might add) at alluding to the discovery of insight.

Insights that lead to finding hope and letting go of the past.

Perhaps, a little bit remorsefulness that pauses to reflect on the loss of innocence.
In addition, there is the glimmer of joy from gaining experience in the wisdom of finding serenity in your own heart.

I like your writing this is very well done.
It was inspiring.

Peace
Dylan


"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"

Dylan Eliot

MsBlue's picture

Well said Elliot! :)
Great and true interpretation!
Thanks a lot!

LovelyMimoza