i miss you.

You were meant to be here with me, but instead you're off with the one who stole you from my heart. Oh how i long for you to hold me, i miss your touch so strong yet so tender and kind. If I could i would wind back the clock and stop the thief who stole you and keep you for myself. My heart was broken but now repaired. I wait for the momwnt when you come running back to me, but I know it will never come. So i write you this letter saying goodbye as my last thoughts before i die.

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Nice!

I really like...good job!


HU4L!!!

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thank you. and how lod are

thank you. and how lod are you.


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this was my first poem i ever

this was my first poem i ever wrote. this is what got me started. my heart was broken but now i Harley Alexis Osborne am happy with my girlfriend who loves me for me and does not expect me to pretend like everyone else does.


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Good Try

Read the PP poets before you write you second poem. You will learn the art from them as I did - Lady A


 

 

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thank you Lady A for the

thank you Lady A for the advice. i will read them.


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