Goodbye

The time has come for our goodbyes.

For whispered words and gentle sighs.

Of memories flashing through my head.

Of better days spent cuddled in bed.

 

Of words of love and kisses deep.

Of waking next to you in sleep.

When did it go wrong…How and why.

Can we stop it. Should we try?

 

It’s far too late. The past is past.

With your cheating ways, the die was cast.

You cursed our love with all your lies.

All that remains are our goodbyes.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Um...I'm not bitter!!! Honest.Tongue Out

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SSmoothie's picture

Well written! love the flow

Well written! love the flow too! great piece!


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

darkpool's picture

Move on. well said

Move on. well said

Beavis's picture

Loved it!

I think you really nailed this!

ljmills's picture

Thank you.

Thank you.

ashes_theartofburning's picture

I can relate.

I really loved the beginning.

It 'tis so hard to let go,

but once you do...the fresh air is exhilarating~!

(^.-)


"We are, Each of us angels with only one wing, and we can only fly by embracing one another." -Luciano De Crescenzo

running_with_rabbits's picture

:) I really enjoyed this I

:) I really enjoyed this

I like how you put a dark and also personal twist on a famous poem's flow

not sure if that was the point or if you just happened to also write ina  rhythm which is well known, either way I enjoyed the read :)


Much Love

Ashley