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Long Distance Love
I've tried...Lord knows I've tried, to take you out of my head and forget all about you.
I've cried...God knows I've cried, as memories fade and I'm no longer lost without you.
I've wished...Christ knows I've wished, that our love be strong enough to stand the separation.
I've prayed...Heaven knows I've prayed, to hear your voice and fill me with elation.
I give up!...Jesus! I give up. I can't take this ache and pain and loss that I feel.
I know...Deep down I know...That the love we share could never be more real.
Author's Notes/Comments:
This is my very first attempt.
Please be gentle with me.
Thanks,
LJMills
:-)
Well, I must say your first attempt is rather impressive.
My first writings are just plain rediculous. To this day, I have always been a phrase-less poet to be exact. So you can imagine my beginnings compared to now.
Splendid read Miss Mills
David
--
"You think Einstein walked around thinking everyone was a bunch of dumb-shits?"
Thank you David. Your opinion
Thank you David.
Your opinion means so much to me.
"Phraseless poet?" What nonsense.
Your amazing poems have encouraged me to try.
I will never...Ever be as good as you but I'll enjoy trying to get better.
LJMills
Very first attempt huh? Well
Very first attempt huh? Well then... good job. I feel ya!
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Many thanks
I appreciate your comment...Thank you.
I am a writer but this is my first poem.
LJMills
It Has Spirits
Sounds like a spirital - the "hollar" mixed with "blues" traditions. You got talent, babe! First poem, mine got pitched for shame - ha ha and ha ~~A~~
Thank you so much. Talent?
Thank you so much.
Talent? Hmmm not too sure about that...Hahaha
I deleted my 2nd one...
I kept re reading and realised it was crap!
I'm a perfectionist...What can I say?