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songs Theres a girl over there in the corner of her soul, shes been sitting there since she was 10 years old. Prettiest girl with deep green eyes, shes so fucked up all she does is lie and she cries.
craving red in the corner of her soul, shes been sitting there since she was 10 years old, lost in her mind and the way things are, yeah. Deception is her only friend, shes on her way to find the end. You cant even begin to see the light, when you lose yourself most every night.
theres a girl over there in the corner of her soul, shes been sitting there since she was 10 years old. Shes craving tears of crimson red. They dont care when youre living nor when youre dead.
cravind red in the cornor of her soul, shes been sitting there since she was 10 years old, lost in her mind and the way things are, yeah. shes a poor little girl with long dark hair, she bleeds so pretty, and its just not fair. They dont know how to see a singel tear, they dont even know that your living in fear.
theres a girl over there in the corner of her soul, shes been sitting there since she was 10 years old. She looks at the knife and its cover with pretty bright red, you can see the blood just gushing out, theres not any doubt that you wil soon be dead.
theres a girl over there in the corner of her sould, shes been sitting there since she was 10 years old, craving red and shes all alone, lost in her mind and the way things are. Yeah. Lost in her mind and the way things are.
I really like this poem and I love the repetetive lines to it with such slight variations. I would like to point out two spelling errors for you however. In paragraph four, bottom line, you swapped the e and the l in the word single. Also in paragraph six, top like you accidently added the letter d to the word soul. Anyway I really like this poem.