Weeping Willow

I am a weeping willow
I have witnessed centuries of turmoil
It comes and goes like the lovers beneath my shade
I remember, the white man as a devil
the religious chants of servant girls

I overshadow the grave of a man who came to paint me
His hands were of feathers and other bird-like features
I feel his veins wrap around my roots when he is sad

And up above, the clouds come in shapes that I have never dreamed
I think of what I have lost over time,
the memories that still shake me
The tips of my fingers touch the water to cry
because I will live a very long life, and my heart will crack and burn and
seize, one quiet night in my bed

My arms make music in the night
There is no other way to cope with the
things that I have seen.

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hopelessly-candid's picture

wow this is.... just wow....

wow this is.... just wow.... super creative... but beyond that... it's entrancing and just incredible.... i love with the whole concept of this poem.... this is seriously amazing 

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:) thank you. This is

:) thank you. This is actually my favorite poem I have ever written. Your comments mean a lot to me and they have brightened up my day


"It is a terrible thing to be so open. It is as if my heart put on a face and walked into the world" -- Sylvia Plath.

hopelessly-candid's picture

It is honestly superbly

It is honestly superbly profound... after I read it... I had to show it to someone it was so great... and they thought it was amazing as well... you really have a tremendous amount of talent

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I can and will say the same

I can and will say the same about you my dear. I have been reading a lot of your stuff lately and it has really inspired and grabbed my attention. Thank you again for your kind words, they mean very much.


"It is a terrible thing to be so open. It is as if my heart put on a face and walked into the world" -- Sylvia Plath.