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Seventeen and left
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Sadness This is the end of the story
where all shadows meet
closing cutrains of death
they dont cover dead mens feet
Slitting of my writs
blood pouring for awhile
thats how my life ended
not with a kiss or smile
No need for shoes where im going
Just a rift of angel light
it'll guide me to my judgement
while i wait bewildered with fright
Heaven hell or inbetween
where am i going ?
im only seventeen.
Hey! I really like this one! <3 Jenn Jenn
this makes me sad that you are/were sad. don't be sad.
even if you are smile.
count your blessings we all have them.
i love your writing. so talented=you.
:D
SmIlE!
it's good for ya!
+jen
Ohh... Very nice. I like this one a lot. Keep it up. =)
~Sarah
WOW. WOW. WOW. WOW. this is SO SO SO good james. really, it is. the rhyming is wonderful - as always :P - and its so dramatic.
hmm title? uhm...how bout "Only Seventeen" OR "Light From The/My Angel" OR "Better Judgement" OR "Pouring (of the/my Blood" hehe u take a pick.
xoxo
luv u
*kisses and hugs*
m
This is a beautiful poem. I wonder about it though. What would make you wanna die? I don't get it. Name it after the persoon or thing that made you write it. Contact me.
HEY! this is a good one i really like it.. sowwie dont have any names for it (left my brain in my locker like i do every weekend) haha but yeah just thought i would let you know that i liked it! -JennJenn