(rewrite) O' pillow please save me

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Sadness

Angels please take my soul and hide it well

My tear-filled pillow is all thats keeping me from hell



Im falling back and forth not sure which way to go

I think death will solve all of my problem though



The yelling and screaming is going to end

one way or another my message will send

This little note while im away

Please get through and win the day



Maybe then my problem will be clear

their lack of care is what i fear

Its why i cry and wish to die

O,pillow please save me until my fallen angel can fly


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Sunny Ham's picture

i dont really get all of it, but it's powerful.

Rebecca Swan's picture

that was really beautiful in a sad and twisted way, but beautiful all the same. The rhyming was good. And it had alot of feeling and was very emotional.