Pride is my undoing

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seven deadly sins

Now a days I walk with my head higher than God
ever since that incident with Mrs.L
I've told the story atleast two hundred times
each time getting prouder it happened to me

I look like a damn hero to these asses
I'm no longer Joe nobody, I'm now Joe somebody
the guy who did it with an older woman
I get respect from these pathetic loosers, even teachers
I am top dog, king of the school

my crush I've had ever scince middle school now notices me
she steals glances then wispers to her girl friend
obviously talking of how studly I am now
now I wait for her to ask me out, instead of her waiting
well she waited but I was too scared to, but now...

I finally go over to her, seeing as she isn't
she's so elegant and beautiful, able to look both and sexy
but what really hits me home is her humbleness
she was beautiful, smart, nice, and honest
popularity and money have nothing to with it

befor I reach her I hear someone talking
a girl reveiwing for her bible class or whatever
"...pride thinkingof your self as higher than anyone.
Including God..." but have no pride and you're nothing
like how I used to be like, befor I was good enough for Gina

"Hey beautiful, we're going to the movies tomorrow"
she doesn't even turn around, hard to get huh?
"Gina, I'm talking to you. there's no reason to resist"
I am getting impaitent. is she deaf? of corse not!
is the room to loud? does she have trouble hearing?

"Can I talk to you privately?" she says unturned
she leads the way, she probably wants to make out
every girl does, she dosn't want to male other girls jelous
we go into the boiler room, the boiler lightly humming
it's the only sound for awhile then she looks me in the eye
only there's no love, only hatred. that's not good

"I will not go to the movies with you tomorrow.
I will never go out with an arrogent bastard
That's why I hate jocks, I like sweet guys
Guys like you were, but you changed
Ever since that rumor about you and Mrs.L came out"

"Its's mot even the fact that you did it
It's the fact that you flaunted it around
You're have even been wearing her God damn lab coat
Did you ever think 'oh this is illegal'
Or 'Mrs.L could loose her job' befor flaunting
Of corse not!" she finished, hating my guts

I don't know what to say, I'm crushed
In the twenty seconds I went from feeling like the king
to the most idiotic moron, she even liked me befor,but now...
now Irepulse her, and may never get her back, as she storms out

The boiler is like my pride, only humming not talking
It may gain attention but that leads to brokenness
only the boiler will not over heat on purpose
I thought of my self higher than God but I'm not even close

Author's Notes/Comments: 

While I read this I laughed at humbleness. ask Elfy she knows why I laughed

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Elfy's picture

Lol good poem and John I

Lol good poem and John I swear! Gah no humbleness!


-Elfy*

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Don't worry ur not gina.

Don't worry ur not gina. She's an old crush that I have had for years. Unfo she's dating someone currently. Ok no humbleness, very humbling words ur humbleness XD IMA CRAZY SONOVABITCH.

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I knew Im not Gina lol I was

I knew Im not Gina lol I was referring to the humble comment you dork! xD
Lmao yes you are!


-Elfy*

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XD y? u r humble tho!!!

XD y? u r humble tho!!!

Elfy's picture

Lmao no!!!!

Lmao no!!!!


-Elfy*

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Lol k humble bee

Lol k humble bee