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(This day refers to February 14, 1996)
Brittiany,
On this day, five years pass
there sat a boy in your science class
He praised you with sweetness and adore
and he had never been in love before
On this day, five years pass
you broke his heart forever last
In infinate pieces, his heart was tore
and to remain that way forever more
On this day, five years ago
he asked you out and you said, "No"
to you, he gave his entire heart
and by you, was ripped apart
On this day, five years ago
his happiness sunk to an all time low
No longer would he be happy and smile
and he felt this way for a long, long while
On this day, five years now
he survived the pain, and doesn't know how
To this day you're still his first love
and you still soar his heart like a graceful dove
On this day, five years now
you still have the ability to make him say "WOW"
You still brighten his darkest day
and he still cares, in an indescribable way
- Jerry/Joseph Huggins
(2001)
this piece is sweet and honest and wow i can relate:)...thank you for taking the time to read some of my stuff...1
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wow this is a really good poem i loved it
That is very cool! The same excact happened to me in 1994, funny thing, I tried to contact her in 2005 and was told to move on and I only wanted to be her friend, ironic huh?! However, your poem was well written and I hope you comment on mine as well!
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You commented on my Poems and i wanna thank you for taking the time to take a look at my poems. This poem is Great its An Okay one
But thanks for the Wonderfull Comments you left me for 3 of my poems i really apriciate it
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Andi
Every girl wants a guy like this. I don't know why, when they get one, they'd turn him away.