Sad Lives In The City

So dreary I have been

No one will let me in

 

I feel so cold

With no abode

 

I'd rather have police arrest

Than live with no rest

 

Oh, dear...

Author's Notes/Comments: 

this isnt as good as others

allets's picture

Actually

The simplicity makes it very fine indeed as a short poem - lots going on in there. Concise, precise - better is a relative term, but I enjoyed this one for its in your face plain spoken words. - Lady A -

 


 

 

ramonathompsont's picture

Short but powerful. very well

Short but powerful. very well done