Alone

she looks around

the empty world

with the feeling

of lonliness

searching and searching

for that peson who cares

the person who wont

walk away

when things get rough

the who loves her

unconditionally

who hugs her when

she's in tears

the on who holds her up

when she is falling to far

the person who will ALWAYS

be there

but instead she cries

herself to sleep every night

she walks around with her

head down

puts a smile on her face

so no one sees her pain

she wears her jacket

so no one sees her pain

she prays at night

that she won't wake up

she tells her friends she's fine

then walks away crying

she thinks when will these

feelings of loneliness and emptiness

fianlly leave

when will she feel loved?

like she belongs somewhere

when will she find the person?

the one who

will love her till the end!

Author's Notes/Comments: 

this was a poem i wrote about myself last year when my boyfriend and i broke up but now we are back together and we are very happy sometimes i guess if you want to know the whole story message me!!

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nightlight1220's picture

Nicely writtten. You missed a

Nicely writtten. You missed a special person in your life. Some people just aren't wired to be happy unless they are with a special "other" i think. Glad to hear you are back together and can be happy now. 

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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

alone's picture

thank you

thank you

AlwaysAdieu's picture

Sad, but Great Poem.

I really felt this; like a sludge hammer hit my chest.

alone's picture

thanks its wierd because im

thanks its wierd because im always surrounded by people but i always feel alone

AlwaysAdieu's picture

That's when your the most

That's when your the most lonely; in a crowded room, watching others not be lonely. But really 'Alone', if you believe you are lonely and will always be so, then that will be the case. Your behavior is shaped by your thoughts, try to think in the affirmitive and your actions will follow suit. Just try it...it may be more complex then just thinking positive for your particular case; but it doesn't hurt to try. :)