A trembling pulse lusting to hit a trembling pulse and interact
Then just flow in the eternal flow, the stream of life
Go up and down and vibrate for a deep delight
So closely tuned in harmony of tones of fife
Or like two waves rushing a long a beam of light
A trembling pulse lusting to fit a trembling pulse in this network
And you don’t know … we all don’t know, it might just work
WOWWIE :*)
I must say I'm impressed by your poem. It truly captures the physically of lusting lovers seeking to collide as their hearts pound and bodies vibrate. You even managed to twine in the complexity of emotions. Don't ever stop writing please because you truly are a talented, tactful poet.
I dont know how serious you meant this poem to be, but it made me smile :)
Oh, the ever searching half circles of Life! ;)
Kindest Regards.
Myra