Going Under

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TEARS OF MINE

DROWNING ME SO

DROWNING ME IN PAIN AND SORROW

I'VE HIT THE BOTTOM



A DARK AND LONELY GRAVE

COLD AND WET

I'M ALL ALONE NOW

MY SOUL CRIES OUT



AM I LOST

CAN I BE SAVED

I CAN'T STOP CRYING

I AM DYING



MY TEARS HAVE STOPPED NOW

BUT IT'S TO LATE...

I'M GONE

Author's Notes/Comments: 

ITS SO OBIVOUS OF WHAT ITS ABOUT...

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Becky Matthews's picture

hiya...you commented a while ago on my poems (thank you :D) so i decided to have a flick through yours...now that i have the time lol...and from what i have seen so far, its great, i lurrrve. I especially like this one, im not sure what it is about it, maybe its the caps? lol...it just seems quite powerful...and something i can relate to.

Will keep on looking and will be sure to keep checking for new ones...:)

(btw...iv added a few more too)

take care xxx