SUNRISE TANKA IN ANTICIPATION OF A MAJOR BLIZZARD

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a simple sunrise

naked branches shuddering

in December air

 

promises of snow blizzard

fill young 'uns hearts with wonder


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allets's picture

You Can Feel

The starkness of

the branches

the air tells you

it comes and when

it comes it will

bring friends.

 

 

 


 

 

georgeschaefer's picture

nice verse, glad to be of

nice verse, glad to be of inspiration.  thank you.

humanfruit's picture

The first stanza really is

The first stanza really is flawless. Methinks it's cool how you called the sunrise "simple" seeming to negate typical poetical conception which tries to bring as much beauty as possible with sparkling words; but "a simple sunrise" is just jazzy. The following lines are equally intimate and enticing.


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I greatly appreciate the

I greatly appreciate the praise.  thank you

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I certainly agree.

I certainly agree.


J-Called

georgeschaefer's picture

again, much thanks

again, much thanks