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Abuse
Abuse
Red means Love
Blue mean sad
then black must something
that gone bad.
Black and blue.
If red mean fire
and blue mean ice.
Black must be dark
then black and blue is sign of
something that gone wrong.
people are abuse all the time
woman and children are the ones
being abuse the most.
If one voice can help one person
just imagine
what more than one million
voice can do.
abuse is too common thing.
-Gene Conner
October 13, 2004
I like the way you utilize the contrasting colors in the first part of the poem. That really works--I think you could probably build on it a little more.